Sitemap
Tantalizing Tales

Publishing fine fiction to spark your imagination. Escape into the unpredictable drama of romance, relationships love dating, and captivating stories of all kinds. Contact via @Club_Tales on X. We are part of the Cocktail Club. Submission Guide - http://jeetwincasinos.com/p/13c662830e

Retro shot of woman standing against a wooden post with a man watching in the background
Common Domain Image

Member-only story

Misunderstanding Prompt, Fictionalised

Warned off the Broody looking Surfer Guy by his Girl

May More
4 min readSep 5, 2022

--

Misunderstanding or mistakes can cause serious problems, but on occasions everyone finds something to giggle about. Here’s an amusing short story about mistaken identity, kind of…

A couple of friends and I had been looking forward to a brief breakaway in Newquay, Cornwall. And the weather looked as if it was going to be on our side too.

I was sitting in the passenger seat with my friend Jane driving and Jill was in the back. As we arrived in the busy seaside town and drove along the high street, I was suddenly aware that Jane… did not… have her eyes on the road. Instead, she had craned her neck as far as possible to check out a guy in a black wet-suit, hugging his sculpted physique, and clasping a surf board under his arm. Dark haired and broody looking.

“Oh… my… Did you see that Greek-god-guy?”

She finally turned her eyes to the traffic lights ahead and, realising they were red, did an emergency stop.

Tantalizing Tales
Tantalizing Tales

Published in Tantalizing Tales

Publishing fine fiction to spark your imagination. Escape into the unpredictable drama of romance, relationships love dating, and captivating stories of all kinds. Contact via @Club_Tales on X. We are part of the Cocktail Club. Submission Guide - http://jeetwincasinos.com/p/13c662830e

May More
May More

Written by May More

I write some... and edit many 💜 I like individuals and hens. Substack -

Responses (21)